Comments on: First Paragraph. http://www.shelleymunro.com/blog/2009/09/26/first-paragraph/ Adventures of a writer living in New Zealand Fri, 10 Feb 2012 01:29:34 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v= By: Shelley Munro http://www.shelleymunro.com/blog/2009/09/26/first-paragraph/comment-page-1/#comment-12308 Shelley Munro Sun, 27 Sep 2009 19:44:16 +0000 http://www.shelleymunro.com/blog/?p=3363#comment-12308 Linda - ah! You'll have to read the book to find out. :mrgreen: Linda – ah! You’ll have to read the book to find out.

]]> By: Shelley Munro http://www.shelleymunro.com/blog/2009/09/26/first-paragraph/comment-page-1/#comment-12307 Shelley Munro Sun, 27 Sep 2009 19:43:50 +0000 http://www.shelleymunro.com/blog/?p=3363#comment-12307 JK - thanks. Julia - I'm glad you enjoyed my opening paragraph. This story is one of my favorites. JK – thanks.

Julia – I’m glad you enjoyed my opening paragraph. This story is one of my favorites.

]]> By: Shelley Munro http://www.shelleymunro.com/blog/2009/09/26/first-paragraph/comment-page-1/#comment-12306 Shelley Munro Sun, 27 Sep 2009 19:42:52 +0000 http://www.shelleymunro.com/blog/?p=3363#comment-12306 RK - thanks! Re: Twitter. I'm also worried about what I would tweeter about. My days just aren't that interesting! RK – thanks!

Re: Twitter. I’m also worried about what I would tweeter about. My days just aren’t that interesting!

]]> By: Linda Henderson http://www.shelleymunro.com/blog/2009/09/26/first-paragraph/comment-page-1/#comment-12298 Linda Henderson Sun, 27 Sep 2009 04:02:42 +0000 http://www.shelleymunro.com/blog/?p=3363#comment-12298 I wonder what happens next ? Can't wait to find out. I wonder what happens next ? Can’t wait to find out.

]]> By: Julia Smith http://www.shelleymunro.com/blog/2009/09/26/first-paragraph/comment-page-1/#comment-12297 Julia Smith Sun, 27 Sep 2009 00:27:50 +0000 http://www.shelleymunro.com/blog/?p=3363#comment-12297 Whoa! What an opener. So much going on. I just love this: 'he heard his front door fly open and hit the stopper. Seconds later it slammed shut. The strident tap-tap of high heels echoed in the hall and Pearl MacInray stomped into his den. Justin took a moment to admire the temper glowing on her face' Maybe you should do a workshop on solid opening first paragraphs. Maybe a blog-workshop, so I could be there... Whoa! What an opener. So much going on. I just love this:

‘he heard his front door fly open and hit the stopper. Seconds later it slammed shut. The strident tap-tap of high heels echoed in the hall and Pearl MacInray stomped into his den. Justin took a moment to admire the temper glowing on her face’

Maybe you should do a workshop on solid opening first paragraphs. Maybe a blog-workshop, so I could be there…

]]> By: J.K. Coi http://www.shelleymunro.com/blog/2009/09/26/first-paragraph/comment-page-1/#comment-12294 J.K. Coi Sat, 26 Sep 2009 14:08:06 +0000 http://www.shelleymunro.com/blog/?p=3363#comment-12294 Great paragraph, Shelley! Great paragraph, Shelley!

]]> By: RKCharron http://www.shelleymunro.com/blog/2009/09/26/first-paragraph/comment-page-1/#comment-12293 RKCharron Sat, 26 Sep 2009 09:49:59 +0000 http://www.shelleymunro.com/blog/?p=3363#comment-12293 Postscript: re: Twitter JK Rowling just joined Twitter. :) Margaret Atwood just joined Twitter :) *gets on bended knee & proffers box of virtual chocolate* won't you reconsider & join the writing community on Twitter? I'll Follow you in a second. :) Love to you & yours, RKCharron xoxo Postscript: re: Twitter
JK Rowling just joined Twitter. :)
Margaret Atwood just joined Twitter :)
*gets on bended knee & proffers box of virtual chocolate* won’t you reconsider & join the writing community on Twitter? I’ll Follow you in a second.
:)
Love to you & yours,
RKCharron
xoxo

]]> By: RKCharron http://www.shelleymunro.com/blog/2009/09/26/first-paragraph/comment-page-1/#comment-12292 RKCharron Sat, 26 Sep 2009 09:45:11 +0000 http://www.shelleymunro.com/blog/?p=3363#comment-12292 Hi :) Thanks for the great paragraph. Great descriptive passage! All the best, RKCharron xoxo PS - Have a wonderful weekend. :) Hi :)
Thanks for the great paragraph.
Great descriptive passage!
All the best,
RKCharron
xoxo
PS – Have a wonderful weekend.
:)

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